I think Paige West needs to find someone to do her writing for her. So she does the research and has the final say but the writing is done by someone else because these articles are crap, and really really hard to get through.
It took me days to get through the first 10 pages of chapter 2 because it was sentence-quote-sentence-quote. Grow a spine and tell me what you’re thinking! After trudging through that I got to a normally written part but why the blessed fuck couldn’t you write like that from the beginning? Use quotes but don’t abuse them! You’re an adult with a degree and years of fieldwork, act like one.
Oh, and the chapter by the end starts waxing poetic about the rain in the village. Where is this coming from? Why is this relevant? Why was Christianity randomly brought up and then abandoned in her other article about the Gimi? Fuck you, lady
edit: Ok, the Christianity was not abandoned but it is still hamfisted. You still need a writer or a proofreader with too much power